Life as a River

Life is like a river
Always moving
Trying to reach the goal
Always flowing
Trying to reach the ocean
Sometimes
when problems become too hard to solve
Life may seen to be going nowhere
When winter comes
the River may freeze
But
deep down
there's always a solution
to keep going on
deep down
there's always a part
that keeps flowing
nearer
and closer
to the
ocean

Author's Note

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Reviews

[TJ]

I agree with Skulli_Bell. Very thoughtful and very true.

[<3Lil.Bit(:]

Simple but deep and thoughtful. I love it.

~Skulli