another dream

another dream

A Poem by Nani Mino
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we have to live whetever.....

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He has left the real dream across the sea.

A boat of death to the world , it `s not yours,

Wherever you go fate can`t set you free.

those whom you love will never reach your shores

wood and water, your name will melt away.

Souvenirs trace you wherever you go .

Think over or all mountains will decay.

There`s seduction but you should say ``no``

Happiness is inside and not outside.

Lo! dear fame is a deep mask for failure.

Different soil means the face has to hide

Wool is black and white , you are a safe creature.

We are a part of time , let `s taste the life.

We `re a part of pain , we should be alive.

 

© 2015 Nani Mino


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It is foretold the young will dream dreams and prophesy. I get a sense of this here.
Should we be alive? Maybe because we are alive we should act like it, or act intentionally on life's potential.
I sense gratitude here. I sense a higher calling.
Consider a format more flowing and opened. Try centering the write or breaking the lines where you would pause while speaking the poem. I learning this skill from other writers here as well.
Good work. Great philosophy.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nani Mino

8 Years Ago

thank you for you precious comment. realy i need your help



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These are beautiful words, 'happiness is inside and not outside', you speak a deep truth with those words. lovely

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is foretold the young will dream dreams and prophesy. I get a sense of this here.
Should we be alive? Maybe because we are alive we should act like it, or act intentionally on life's potential.
I sense gratitude here. I sense a higher calling.
Consider a format more flowing and opened. Try centering the write or breaking the lines where you would pause while speaking the poem. I learning this skill from other writers here as well.
Good work. Great philosophy.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nani Mino

8 Years Ago

thank you for you precious comment. realy i need your help
You created nice images as I read this piece!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nani Mino

8 Years Ago

thank you for stopping by and your support

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Nani Mino
Nani Mino

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