the cell phone

the cell phone

A Poem by Nani Mino
"

the real love

"

the cell phone is still calm in my poor hand,

wails  like a sad orphan in the lap of pain.

Ah! I scream the other part  in which land?

Heavy minutes for my heart to sustain,

Before I see her number in the screen,

Before I switch off the hope of meeting.

I will give her a chance to be the queen

 In a world she buried her sick meaning.

Now all the numbers are the same to me

0h! let not our minds on the phone to be,

 Life is  a fleeting glimpse, so we can see.

The light of truth when death sets our souls free.

Love is for ever only to the One,

Keep close to him , warm yourself by his sun.

 

© 2015 Nani Mino


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So intense. I could feel the angst. Beautifully done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


well Nani, I really enjoyed this, especially the ending. The ending seemed incredibly profound to me. The third line from the bottom really blows me away. Nice work all around though. I like the way it ended up making me feel.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Life is busy and distracting. Yet the Sun seems to make Its presence known eve if we do not look up form our occupations.
Enjoyable read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Warm myslef by sun was deep,but I'm blessed to even encounter your talent!
Cell Phone is HOTTTTTTTT!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nani Mino

8 Years Ago

do you know who is the One?
fierceauthor

8 Years Ago

The one is GOD.
Nani Mino

8 Years Ago

thanks you are very clever and talented
All, in all. It is good. It tells us about a relationship that seems to be going downhill. Well fhat was my opinion anyway. Except for a few flaws in your grammar, the poem worked out pretty well. Keep it up

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nani Mino

8 Years Ago

tell me where is the flaw
KingDavid

8 Years Ago

It's not exactly a flaw. It's more of irregular language. Don't worry, this is a really nice piece. .. read more
Nani Mino

8 Years Ago

do you know if you master the language you can break it . thank you my friend.could you tell me som.. read more

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