invisible

published by Ancient Heart magazine in UK

to rise on wings, dance in the sky

art's fair loves make yielding souls

clear minds so bright in spirits' eyes

life circles, kindred, millions old.

to celebrate ancestral match

from clouds blue heart-found watchful gaze

souls' ancient rites from love's long past

bless bread of life for all our days

rare distance gone, one soft caress

be close my harbored spirit's warmth

no touch to feel, false thoughts redress

blind image paints, yet has no form.

real beauty dares not synthesize

to rise on wings dance in the sky.

 

 

Reviews

Further dwelling on detachment and appreciation.

It is interesting how you are able to give a good idea on how to remain unattached, yet appreciative. it lets things beautiful be enjoyed.

Wonderful concept.

A wonderful piece

[Gandré]

what a wonderful idea to write about those qualities that give pleasure to our senses and stay invisible. I adored this airy structure of your poem, almost like a breeze - here was it and gone ...... totally beautiful lines. I mention here "souls' ancient rites from love's long past"------this is something I adored. _And you speak about an universal model in transience of times....terrific. congratulation on having this published, dear Nan.