Ascension

published out in L.A. some time ago I might put this one is a collection

I thought I was losing something;
my ego
my mind
the control I chose
in one split microsecond
to leave behind.

I arose in blue sky
sifted through clouds,
dawn sunned my insides.

I was free.
the heady little trip humans see
had lifted.
I was blissed
by everything I could see.

The past,
an incongruency
melted mind and spirit
out of argumentation
into surreal imagination.
Drifting, lifting
I danced with the angels.

Upon wakening
I was still me.

Author's Note

selecting a genre always baffles me, aren't we hybrids when you get down to facts?

Reviews

[Gandré]

This is about dreaming. daydreaming is important, we freeourselves and can keep low frequency. I like how airy this sounds, I read it loud.
an incongruency
melted mind and spirit
out of argumentation
into surreal imagination.----------this is very pretty. I like the way you wrote this, metaphysical. I just posted a poem, where this could be a part of it.. funny. how we are, in the same thought. love.

[Adela Muresan]

What a beautiful poem.
The connection between you and divinity in sorrow, and the revelation of self go together in harmony.

A.M.

[Touché Armada]

I love this Nan... Its beautiful :)

A stunning evening to you.