coffee with cream.

coffee with cream.

A Poem by Haden
"

my doctor says i need to cut down on my caffeine intake. i say that's just silly.

"

In a college town, where the students are spoiled,
where the rich patrons wander in and out,
I found my solace ...
living in the fingers of a hot blonde cellist dyke
working at the local coffee shop.

I order my coffee with cream in a ceramic cup.

Sitting in the corner, pretending to check my email,
stealing glances at the girl on bar,
devising new uses for the honey on the condiment tray,
soaking myself as I imagine the barista topping me off.

I order a refill ... in a to-go cup.

I watch you leave, follow you home.
You hang your keys by the door, wander into your room,
and present yourself to a woman waiting naked beneath your mocha sheets.
She watches you undress, sucks the dirt from your fingertips.
Looking up at you she moves her fingers back and forth,

first into your c**t and then sinking them greedily back into her own.
Your head tips back as her mouth covers your espresso-bean c**t.
Through the open window I watch your n*****s perk,

hear you moan.
You start to say something about a shower but then trail ...
I stifle my own cries as I voyeur outside your window sill.
The travel cup is holding it’s own waiting at my heel,
my right hand is brewing a mounting storm.
I time my peak to match your satisfied scream,
collapsing in ecstasy against your outer bedroom wall.
                            
I leave the coffee cup.

You call me in the morning,
sending shivers up my spine as you slyly ask,
“What, no tip?”

© 2008 Haden


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Wow! Now I have a new reason to love coffee! This heated me up more than my first morning cup! Let's see, I think my favorite part was here:
"Sitting in the corner, pretending to check my email,
stealing glances at the girl on bar,
devising new uses for the honey on the condiment tray,
soaking myself as I imagine the barista topping me off."
That was fantastic. The ending was a punch right in the middle of the work. Great word choice! You never know what people are thinking around you! Lol!

"The travel cup is holding it's own waiting at my heel,
my right hand is brewing a mounting storm."
That's a really hot line for a coffee lover. Wow.

I think I'm going to the coffee shop now! Keep up the tasty work! I'm a big fan!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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what are they putting in your cup at that coffee shop??? ;)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

...Wow. definately not what I expeted from the title and description. but I'm in no way dissapointed. This was amazing. And considering I am also a coffee addict, it works. Plus, who hasn't had a fantasy about the cute little barista at the local coffee shop?

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

[i agree with you about the caffeine intake] I like this, it's very captivating :]

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OMG! How hot are you? Hey, I'll tip you...over onto the bed! C'mere...closer...CLOSER. Right there!

Love this! It's funny you should write a poem about coffee! Very funny indeed.
Yummy!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I especailly love this because the woman i am seeing works at a coffee shop :o) One with a mermaid on the cup to be exact. :o)

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I'd never give up coffee either... you doctor is silly.

The story went a whole other direction than I thought it would, capturing me from the start and taking me on a whirlwind, caffine induced, erotic voyage through to the end.

Well done!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

In a single word...................SWEET!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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