Deja Vue

something that came to me when I woke up this morning.

CLICK!

 

''What was that? I could have sworn I heard some thing.''

 

I am standing in a hallway. I have no idea how I got here. Just standing here. I feel I have been here before. For some reason I feel a compulsion to walk down the hallway.

 

Every thing is painted white, There are identical doors on each side. The doors have strange hieroglyphics on them. I have no idea what they say.

 

At the end of the hallway is a door identical as all the rest. It is the same as all the rest, except it only has two hieroglyphics on it.

UP

 

The door opens onto a landing. There is a set of ascending stairs. I climb the stairs and find a door marked,

REORIENTATION

 

Opening the door I find a large room. On one side is a low counter with two people behind it. At the far end are rows of shelves full of books. On the end of each are more hieroglyphics. On one wall is a series of shelves with magazines and papers displayed. In the center are tables and chairs.

 

''Hello, Mister Dean. I see you decided to join us again.''

 

I hear the click! again and everything goes dark.

 

''Damn! there it goes again. I thought programing said they had it fixed.''

 

''I guess we will have to send him back down. This makes the third time. There damn robots are so tempermental.''

 

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CLICK!

 

''What was that? I could have sworn I heard some thing.''

 

I am standing in a hallway. I have no idea how I got here. Just standing here. I feel I have been here before. For some reason I feel a compulsion to walk down the hallway.

 

Reviews

[Ryan D. Mosley]

Hmmmmmmm... quite an intriguing piece of work that you have written. I enjoyed reading it. I think it was some kind of program, but I couldn't tell, so you should elaborate more on what is going on. It was an OK story, but I feel like you should extend it more and make it a good or possible even a great story. Overall: Alright story!