Just F*****g Swim

Just F*****g Swim

A Poem by nadia dmitri
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Gulps of the delft water

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I am tired of watching you build a house on a frozen lake
I would stab the ice over and over and over and over 
Into shards and chunks and rubble and ruin 
Until my hands are numb and bloody 
Until my head is bobbing up and down
Above the splintering flapping  
Taking unwilling gulps of the delft water 
If it meant you would just f*****g swim 

© 2024 nadia dmitri


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A raw as hell desire for someone to battle demons perhaps. Finely laid words but, not sure what has happened for you to use such fierce languages. Worrying to read. Sincerely hope things heal soon.

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Added on December 24, 2024
Last Updated on December 24, 2024
Tags: metaphor, poetry, symbolism, allegory, free verse