Will you?

so many question going on my head and i think this the only way i can express a few of them,i hope you enjoy it

Will you remember me when I'm gone?

Will you wake up praying for me at dawn?

Will you remember me,

when my soul into my body will never be?

Will you miss me,

when the reason why you can't even see?

Will you love me the same way,

when I won't be there for you day by day?

Will you remember me??

Will you remember ,

how hard it was to feed my soul?

Or complain about how hard it was to fill that hole?

would you dare?

Oh do you ever care?!

Author's Note

I hope you'll like it, and i admire your criticism :)

Reviews

[tyson]

It's sad that you don't really appreciate what you have until it's gone or taken away from you, whatever it is. It's even worse feeling being the person that isn't appreciated. Not sure if that's what you were going for, but that's what I took from it. There's raw feeling in this, it gives it a real authentic feel, likes it more specific that just a vague thought, as if it's directed towards someone real. Making this real.

[Brave girl]

thank you for ur nice review =)

[khalid]

very nicely penned..it really reflects the worries of lovers regarding true feelings of love..

[Brave girl]

yes exactly! thank you for reading =D

[Bill O. Writes]

Very heartfelt piece here. We all want to know we are wanted and feel like we mean something. No matter how you think of yourself you're always loved by someone. Even if its one person. Keep your head up in turmoil.

[Brave girl]

thank you so much! it means alot =D

[Sophy Freebirds]

Ahh the uncertainity of whether or not always lingers in our minds.. this write is quite relateable and the rhetorical questions asked emphasize how importance his remembrance is to you.. An intense write girl :)

~Sophy

[Brave girl]

thank you for a constructive review! thanks it means a lot to me

[Lisa]

This was very intimate for me, beautifully written.

[Brave girl]

thank you so much,i'm glad u liked it :)

[Blogger]

This is well written, but really sad to read! 0(

A very identifiable write for most of us.

[Brave girl]

yea well i was sad while writing it,i guess that i write better when i'm sad! thanks for the review,i appreciate it =D

[Blogger]

Are things better now I assume? I hope.

[Brave girl]

yeah it's much better...haha that's why i can't write anymore,lol!

[Blogger]

You should write more! Indeed.

[Brave girl]

............=)

[Blogger]

This sounds like song lyrics......is it? It could be i suspect.

[Brave girl]

oh well i don't think it is,but u can check if you want! yey free country ;)

[Blogger]

I meant that you could write music. This sounds so song like..

[Brave girl]

okey well thank you for the stopping by,and reading my poem :)

[Blogger]

It was my pleasure. I could almost hear music while reading it.

[Brave girl]

well that's great =D

[Brave girl]

Many wandering questions, it seems here, for and to reach the one, you wrote it for...
Intense, and heartfelt. I hope he does remember, I do hope because you are a sweet girl.

- Elisa

[Brave girl]

aww thank you so much Elisa, it means the world to me what you said =D
-Nada

You are very welcome Nada :) :)

[Ruth]

Saddening in many ways...insightful in many others, pleased to meet you Brave Girl :) x

[Brave girl]

aww thank you soo much for the review, it means a lot

[Eve Ola]

the writing style is simply awesome n the way u put questions i really like it, I can relate too

[Brave girl]

thank you for a such great review :) i appreciate it

[Eve Ola]

your welcome :)

[Brave girl]

................:)