Will you?

so many question going on my head and i think this the only way i can express a few of them,i hope you enjoy it

Will you remember me when I'm gone?

Will you wake up praying for me at dawn?

Will you remember me,

when my soul into my body will never be?

Will you miss me,

when the reason why you can't even see?

Will you love me the same way,

when I won't be there for you day by day?

Will you remember me??

Will you remember ,

how hard it was to feed my soul?

Or complain about how hard it was to fill that hole?

would you dare?

Oh do you ever care?!

Author's Note

I hope you'll like it, and i admire your criticism :)

Reviews

[tyson]

It's sad that you don't really appreciate what you have until it's gone or taken away from you, whatever it is. It's even worse feeling being the person that isn't appreciated. Not sure if that's what you were going for, but that's what I took from it. There's raw feeling in this, it gives it a real authentic feel, likes it more specific that just a vague thought, as if it's directed towards someone real. Making this real.

[Brave girl]

thank you for ur nice review =)

[Girl With A Pen]

I love this because I too find myself asking these questions and you were able i form these questions into a beautiful art form of poetry

[SmittyJas]

Most people would say they care with a God fearing love inside the tugs at our hearts with sentimental pride For you I will remember the times reading your poetry and getting to know your soul what you write from the heart guided by God's Love expressed in words God will for your spilling out of your harmony to humanity to visit What deeply you have hidden and what you will only express to the world in your scribbles and poems of love and respect of Friends and family.

[~]

So many questions.. when we are in love, we do wish the feeling is mutual, that the other hurts as much, wants as much, loves as much.
lovely! :D

[Brave girl]

Thank you for the review =D

[Justin]

that was really good :) u were able to talk about questions that many people ask themselves everyday :) great job :)

[Brave girl]

Thank you do much :D

[Brave girl]

So* lol typo

[Justin]

your welcome :) :) :) it is funny :P

[Brave girl]

Yep ........^-^

[Roshan Nair]

Lovely write :) ITs amazing how the mind questions one particular phenomenon such as love... you've brought out so many layers to it. great work :) cheers

[Brave girl]

Thank you so much dear writer

[Double T]

Nice poems. You should check out the ones I wrote.

[Brave girl]

Okey i will do when i have the chance =D

[Double T]

Thanks for responding :)

[Tate Morgan]

Hi dear interesting concept here so nice to see you again

[Brave girl]

Thank you for the nice review... =D

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This was very deep, soulful, heartfelt and meaningful.
So so many unanswered questions, running through your head huh.
This was a great emotion filled piece, written from your heart
Great write :)

[Brave girl]

Thank u so much for the review

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Anytime :)

[Jamestown]

Nicely done, so cute thanks for sharing.

[Paper Forks]

A lost love, pining for another chance. Well-paced. Nicely written. I look forward reading more of your work.

[Brave girl]

Thank you for your review, and i'd be glad to see other reviews =D

[Paper Forks]

I'd be delighted if you could do the same.

[Brave girl]

That would be my pleasure