I am invincible

A Poem by Brave girl

No i really feel that way:)

What an ugly feeling to be weak

with fear i was playing hide and seek...

But the decision is in my hand

wether i sit or stand

wether i keep running

or stop hiding...

I chose to fight

the past had hurt me a lot,

it's time to put the last dot!

No more tears,

those tears have made me strong

but keeping on crying is wrong;

I will embrasse the fact

that it's all just a memory from the past

because now I'm leaving all the hard times behind

and a note that you might find:

"I AM INVINCIBLE"

© 2013 Brave girl

Author's Note

well it's abit of a revealing of the true me, ihope the you will like it :)

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Reviews

KAin

Hello again! Feels like it's been a while...
Other than a few typos I spotted - 'embrace' instead of 'embrasse', and 'whether', in place of 'wether' -
I like this poem! Shows a true fighting spirit - fitting with the name, eh, Brave Girl?
Keep up the good work, friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

thank you for the nicereview and for giving me pointers about my stupid typos !!!

Rahul

Good job, i liked the theme of the piece. Well ... am glad that your now strong :) So, stay strong and yes it's true "Keeping on crying is wrong" well said .. keep writing, your good at writing.1

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

thank you so much dear writer !

Prritiy

I chose to fight
the past had hurt me a lot,
it's time to put the last dot!
No more tears,
.
.
"I AM INVINCIBLE"

Voice of a Brave girl :) yes you are invincible, a true you, a fighter and tears are not always a sign of weakness but dispelling the venom inside.

best wishes