I am invincible

No i really feel that way:)

What an ugly feeling to be weak

with fear i was playing hide and seek...

But the decision is in my hand 

wether i sit or stand

wether i keep running

or stop hiding...

I chose to fight

the past had hurt me a lot,

 it's time to put the last dot!

No more tears,

those tears have made me strong

but keeping on crying is wrong;

I will embrasse the fact 

that it's all just a memory from the past

because now I'm leaving all the hard times behind

and a note that you might find:

"I AM INVINCIBLE"

Author's Note

well it's abit of a revealing of the true me, ihope the you will like it :)

Reviews

[Half Dream]

"I chose to fight
the past had hurt me a lot,
it's time to put the last dot!
No more tears,
those tears have made me strong
but keeping on crying is wrong;
I will embrasse the fact
that it's all just a memory from the past
because now I'm leaving all the hard times behind
and a note that you might find:
"I AM INVINCIBLE" "

Wow!... You're by far a very talented writer. I can relate to this piece especially those lines. I also had a very painful past and I'll leave it behind. I love the rhythm in this outstanding write. You have a great skills in writing. I love your style!! Beautiful poem. :)

Thanks for sharing Brave girl.. :)

[Brave girl]

aww thank alot for the great review!! i think i'm making friends here!! =D
thanks again dear writer !!

[Half Dream]

You're very welcome. :)

[BlueDreams]

This was a very inspiration poem :) You know even i had written my personal poem, which i haven't posted, but just like this..

[Brave girl]

great, thanks for the review

[Stephen]

Umm .. this poem`s came from the worst periods of your life ~~ time because the power of the words here`s reflecting some misery of your beautiful heart through the words. Now I must say, your "Display Name" suits your personality. Good one! You`ve well written the feelings of yours ~~ in words yourself holding or keeping your own seductive heart right in the palm of your soft thin hands making it bleed ~~ all of day & nights ~~ in words. Umm, yeah, I like the title too, it`s very impressive.

[Brave girl]

thank you again for a really nice review ;)

[A. Amos]

You're gifted with treasure filled mind i loved your work, soon will come to read more; tata

[Brave girl]

oh thank you so much, it's great to hear such words from others...well thanks again dear writer!
read moreoh thank you so much, it's great to hear such words from others...well thanks again dear writer!

[Norma Gonzalez]

Here is the thing about writing.....there are no rules.....with the "past has hurt me a lot" maybe "the past has hurt me lots...it's time to put the last dot"......and "but keeping on crying is wrong" maybe "but to keep on crying is wrong".....other seems to rhyme at the right spots....all the details of your feelings gives readers the idea that being afraid is no sin but standing up is a much better fin...

[Brave girl]

thanks for the great revie and advices you give me...I am always open to learn more! thanks again

[genocide]

a very good poem i like it

[Brave girl]

thanks, it's so sweet!

[Sami Khalil]

"I chose to fight

the past had hurt me a lot,

it's time to put the last dot!

No more tears,

those tears have made me strong

but keeping on crying is wrong;"

[Brave girl]

you like that part?? :)

[Sami Khalil]

I do...:).....................

[Brave girl]

oh i am glad!!

[Sami Khalil]

:)......................

[Fallen hero]

I like it :). Word choice could be slightly better and the flow of the poem was off a bit but other than that I like the idea and background emotion in the vocabulary.

[Brave girl]

oh thank u!

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

A write that shows a great fight with great strength for the future. Nice write.

[Brave girl]

thanks a lot!!!