I am invincible

No i really feel that way:)

What an ugly feeling to be weak

with fear i was playing hide and seek...

But the decision is in my hand 

wether i sit or stand

wether i keep running

or stop hiding...

I chose to fight

the past had hurt me a lot,

 it's time to put the last dot!

No more tears,

those tears have made me strong

but keeping on crying is wrong;

I will embrasse the fact 

that it's all just a memory from the past

because now I'm leaving all the hard times behind

and a note that you might find:

"I AM INVINCIBLE"

Author's Note

well it's abit of a revealing of the true me, ihope the you will like it :)

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome poem.... I love that you wrote words straight from your heart that reflect the true you :) Good work

[Brave girl]

Thank you so much

[Roshan Nair]

A personal conviction comes through so clearly to push aside the obstacles of life.. great work!

[Brave girl]

Thank you for the review... :D

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This is so strong, courageous, inspiring and filled with confidence.
Not everyone has this kind of strength, I know I don't. I admire you for that.
Great piece :)

[Brave girl]

Aaawww thank you sooo much.. it has been tough for me to get to that point..but im glad that i did :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Im glad that you did to, its great really.
Your welcome :)

[Brave girl]

........... =D

[khalid]

i really like it..it has great deal of hope for frustrated feeling ones..

[Brave girl]

thank you so much for the review

[Blogger]

Very nice! And good to know you better. You sound strong here!

[Brave girl]

thank you very much!! i appreciate it

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Wonderful piece of poetry. Very well done.

[Sophy Freebirds]

I did not only liked it but i loved it.. "dwell not in the past, have no doubts about future,but live in the presence." ;) This world is a battlefield and we all fighters in it.. I am inspired.. Keep writing friend

~Sophy

[Brave girl]

thank you so much, you have no idea how much this means to me! =D

[Sophy Freebirds]

De nada brave girl!! Stay strong ;)

~Sophy

[Brave girl]

Gracias me nueva amiga =D

[Ryan Riley]

I like this a lot.....it's hard to put things in the past and move forward sometimes. I am a firm believer in what doesn't kill us makes us stronger. Good write!

[Brave girl]

yes i love that saying too! and thanks for a nice review Ryan =)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Oh how I love this piece! The title speaks for itself.

I will embrasse the fact
that it's all just a memory from the past
because now I'm leaving all the hard times behind
and a note that you might find:
"I AM INVINCIBLE"

This lines are so powerful!
Great piece!

[Brave girl]

thank you so much,i'm glad you liked it =D that made me so happy

[Natalie Dieudonne]

You're welcome :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Very painful at starting but seemed very impressive in last .. in an ending. Very inspiration poem for healing the broken hearts.

[Brave girl]

thank you for a nice review;i'm glad you liked it=D

[Wórdsmíth]

Your welcome ;) Actually, I like reading your stuffs XD

[Brave girl]

well that's great, please keep reading till the end =D

[Wórdsmíth]

Lol, Well, if you say so then Okay .. I'll read your bunches of stuffs and leave your some great reviews soon .. xoxo

[Brave girl]

well that's just amazing; looking forward to know what u think about my other stuffs :)

[Wórdsmíth]

That`s great ... hey you too can check out some of my work. I`d love to hear from you .. your kind words ;)

[Brave girl]

okey i sure will :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Thank you very much. You`re far kind ;)

[Brave girl]

thanks for that :)