The lonely girl

a little story , on a breeze

Caught inside a room full of fears 

lied down in  a bed of a million tears,

the lonely girl hides away from pain

keeping the world locked out

as her life swirled down the drain.

laying in a bed of a million tears, she sees no end to the pain;

walking that slow walk 

death is the only thing left to obtain.

wrapping that neckless around her neck with tears in her eyes

to the pain she says her goodbyes

but inher time of healing,she finds something she didn't expect,

someone with whom she can connect.

the two laugh and talk as they work to get healthy together,

they bond and grow so close, it's like they were held by a tether.

the lonely girl heals her mind, and make to her torture an end,

and finally she leaves with a best friend.

         THE LONELY GIRL IS NO LONGER LONELY!!

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Rahul]

THE LONELY GIRL IS NO LONGER LONELY!!
This single line's damn great... liked this piece again, well, you made this , as i asked that would you make some more writes or not... and tell you can make and you dig it :)
what a great write, you made. Thanks for writing such a nice piece. A great writer always writes, writes and writes as you do:)
well penned once again.

[Brave girl]

thank you again for reading !

[Rahul]

Your welcome again for being nice and taking time for replying!

[Brave girl]

oh sure that's how it should be, right??

[Rahul]

lol, you're funny :)

[Brave girl]

............:)

[zaneybear]

just wow, i like the saving at the end at a lot it fits the saying "it always gets better" for her it did, she found her friend:), the only thing negative is the spacing, some places you're missing a space and sometimes there are too many spaces between words, and i dont say this to be mean because this poem was absolutely beautiful!

[Brave girl]

thank you and i totally get your point, thank you for reviewing and caring :)