That dream

really dear poem

oh what a dream,

where everything seems like heaven

where flowers have blossomed 

by the day I was born in 1997

oh that dream,

that reachable dream, where I only run wild 

and not thinking about being the perfect child

that same old dream,

where I can be with the ones who I miss

where I can always get my goodnight kiss!

Deep down I know that it will soon go away

and by the time I am going to be asked,

I'll just have to say:

" I know you had to go away

I wont say I was lonely

but i will sure say that I miss you Daddy"

Author's Note

i hope you will like and appreciate it like I do :)

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

This is very heart warming being a father of 2 daughter's whom I love.

[Moon]

This is sweet and very touching. I hope you get to see your father soon.

[Brave girl]

thank youuu, i appreciate it

[Moon]

You are welcome

[Brave girl]

.................:)

[Blogger]

This is incredibly sweet. Does he know? Has he read this? I am sure he would be touched.

[Wórdsmíth]

Lovely poem .. and hey, thanks for defining that that you born in 1997, well, it`s awesome to know .. xoxo Another beautiful write I enjoyed reading .. XD

[Brave girl]

thank you; but why ,did u wanted to know my age?? ;)

[Wórdsmíth]

Your welcome .. Oopps!! I didn`t mean to ... lol But it`s always good to know about great friends who`re talented and far kind ;)

[Brave girl]

okey so how old are u ?? :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Lol ... xoxo Shhhh ... Secret. xoxo but don`t worry, i`m not a kid and umm, yeah ...probably of your age but your a bit younger than me and which`s again a great news to me ..and to you too as well .. xoxo

[Brave girl]

okey the pass inbox and tell me ;)

[Wórdsmíth]

No .. it`s okay, Brave girl. I think, this`s a writing site!! Don`t ya think, sorry .. i`m not looking for anything .. i`m not meant to be rude but sorry, we can talk in covos .... about writing ;) XD

[Brave girl]

what about facebook??

[Wórdsmíth]

Sorry ;)

[Brave girl]

well okey...........

[Wórdsmíth]

Thanks .. we can talk on here ;)

[Brave girl]

yep we can

[anxia]

Aww. Hope you both reunite in the happiest way possible. God bless you. A lovely poem!

[Mr.Cardigan]

this is realy good the emotion is shown i like it :) thumbs up

[Brave girl]

thanks a lot :)

[Mr.Cardigan]

no problem

[DJ]

Really awesome writing, I like your style and the flow. I could be wrong but the end sounds like a passing or maybe someone left for good? As the person below also said. If that is the case then I am sorry for your loss but happy that you experienced happiness like that expressed at the start of this poem.

[Brave girl]

like i said no one passed away, but he's not with me and left me with an aching soul
thanks for the review

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Happy birthday for I feel this poem touches on that but also on your appreciation to be born in a great loving family under the care of God almighty but at the end I felt sorrow for some death ( I could be wrong ) or someone left for good...You are excelling day by day ...Bravo

[Brave girl]

dad is not dead but he's away for no reason and it left a big hole in my heart!

[Sami Khalil]

I thought about those two possibilities. I hope the love of God will fill the void eventually. I lost my dad and I still cry from now and then when someone mentions his name. May Allah be with you ...:)

[Brave girl]

thanks dear writer

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Brave girl]

..............:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)...