Why?!

A Poem by Brave girl

little story :/

you left behind an innocent little dreamer,

you made her think deeper

so she can make her dreams come true.

shame on you, you couldn't give her a clue.

you made her realize how good she is on the inside,

you taught her to never hide.

you were always there to cheer

you also showed her how to get over here fear.

she loved you alot

but you killed everything with goodbye,

and now she's laying there asking herself: why?!

© 2013 Brave girl

Author's Note

i hope you like it!

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SmittyJas

Very loving charming piece of poetry written a touch of love and say goodbye another fish in the ocean cast your net to the sea cast your line set your bate you will find another good Bitter better then the one you had before Love the innocents of WHY.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Wórdsmíth

Wow, another deep aching poem. I think, he should have left you for your happiness because this`s all what brings for lovers ... xoxo ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

thanks for the lovely review :) i appreciate it

Baby Ricochet

Good emotional impact. Write some more.

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

i sure will,thanks

Rahul

Everystanza's great, filled with strong words. Keep writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

i hope that God will give me the strenght to do so! thank you again

Luke Rawlings

A pretty good write, well done! A sad allegory, but something many can relate to.

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

thank you so much!!

Sage Gabrielle

Goodbyes are always so hard. You're left mourning the loss of someone who hasn't even died, and you're forcing yourself to reconcile the fact they're out of your life and they might as well have passed.

Good poetry invokes thought and emotion. I commend you for doing both so eloquently.