Goodbye

A Poem by Brave girl

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I promise that I won't cry

I guess it's time for me to go

I guess it's it is my last goodbye

I promise I will remember your love and care mother

and I will sure miss your words dad

and my friends, I hope you'll remember those times that we laughed together

because actually it was one of the best moments I've ever had

But it's time for me to say goodbye

I guess it was was more than just a drive by.

God I cry out to you

before I come to death

I will do good for this life

untill my last breath

No turning back

I begin to fall

into the darkness

I hear it call.

© 2013 Brave girl

Author's Note

read bitween the lines!

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Blogger

This is full of meaning. I read it several times and think it could mean about 3 different things. I am glad you leave the authors note.

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

haha thank you for the review, it means a lot

Wórdsmíth

Awww, so sweet words. Beautiful poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

thaaaaaaaaank you for another sweet review XD

Laminators Dubai

it a song by avril lavigne movie jack and jill
"Goodbye"

Goodbye, goodbye, goodbye my love
I can't hide, can't hide, can't hide what has come

I have to go
I have to go
I have to go
And leave you alone
But always know
Always know
Always know that I love you so
I love you so
I love you so, oh

Goodbye brown eyes
Goodbye for now
Goodbye sunshine
Take care of yourself

I have to go
I have to go
I have to go
And leave you alone
But always know
Always know
Always know that I love you so
I love you so, oh
I love you so, oh

La lullaby
Distract me with your rhymes
La lullaby

La lullaby
Help me sleep tonight
La lullaby
(La lullaby, la lullaby)

I have to go (goodbye)
I have to go (lullaby)
I have to go (goodbye)
And leave you alone

But always know (goodbye)
Always know (brown eyes)
Always know (goodbye)
That I love you so

I love you so (goodbye lullaby)
I love you so, oh (goodbye)
I love you so (goodbye brown eyes)
I love you so (goodbye)
I love you so
I love you so

Goodbye brown eyes
Goodbye my love

Posted 11 Years Ago

Laminators Dubai

i read it two times and its beautiful (i mean bad becoz its "goodby")
that was something good.
i am a comedian so just easy on my comment.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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11 Years Ago

lol thanks for the nice review :)

11 Years Ago

that was nice for you well i can do better then that
*tada* read my stupid paragraph and comme.. read more

11 Years Ago

lol.......

Rahul

Here again a creative Imaginary i can see in your words. You've to write some more on it. Your theme's great. Keep it up :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

thank you a lot dear writer :)

Sami Khalil

Wow. I could feel the sorrow and agony leaving your family and friends and fall into the darkness of life .
We all reach that point due to depression or just want to be independent to pursue our own path.
A very good write...:)