Before I die

it's not a big list, and it is not everything that i wanna do in life...but it's a part of it :)

I make a list

Whenever I cry

Of all the things I want to do

Before I die

It’s not too long

It doesn’t have to be

Because I don’t know

What I will live to see

Goals, experiences

I don’t want to miss…

So I wrote them down

& it goes something like this:

Prove that I can fly

Do a stupid dare

Celebrate new years

Right in time square

Crowd surf at a concert

Make my wishes come true

Ask   a guy to dance

Give my crush a clue

Forgive,

Someone whom doesn’t deserve me (T)

Apologize,

To someone for all I put them through (Myself)

See the order in the chaos

See the good in the bad

See the light in the darkness

See happiness in what makes me sad

Win a championship

Make history,

So future generations

Will learn about my story

We only live once

Like all those hipsters say,

Why not take their advice

For just one day?!

 

 

Author's Note

I hope you like it :)

Reviews

[AdorableDreams]

I really like this one. Very good job! I want to read this over and over again:)

[Brave girl]

i'm glad you had that feeling :)

[AdorableDreams]

Haha okay:-)

[Brave girl]

:)

[Brave girl]

:)

[khalid]

i really like it...very simple wishes. the poem is pessimistic and sad but you have written it in a very nice way..

[Brave girl]

thank you very much =D

[Baby Ricochet]

Good list

[Brave girl]

it's not all i want...thanks for the review

[Karl Woof Junior]

i like it but i feel you have to do it now, dare yourself to be bold, like the doritos commercials

[Brave girl]

lol,i hope i will someday...thank you for reviewing

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Excellent read and write.

[Brave girl]

thanks :)

[SamanthaSweeney]

Thoughtful, optimistic, realistic and generally happy and bubbly ! A nice touch to my Sunday night, thank you :D

[Brave girl]

you are the most welcome,and thanks to you for the nice review!

[Blue Belle]

Love it! :)

[Brave girl]

glad you did

[Fallen hero]

Really nice morals in this poem really liked it!

[Brave girl]

thank you for the sweet review :)

[Keith LaFountaine]

I like it! I think we all have a list of things we want to do, whether mental or written down, and checking off that list can be somewhat difficult as life progresses. Nice poem, good job!

[Brave girl]

thank you for your honest and nice review :)

[Sami Khalil]

"See the order in the chaos
See the good in the bad
See the light in the darkness
See happiness in what makes me sad
Win a championship
Make history,
So future generations
Will learn about my story
We only live once
Like all those hipsters say,
Why not take their advice
For just one day?!"
I think this one is one of your best philosophical writes on life if I may call it that. So much truth and wisdom in it. I think that comes from pondering and a lot of experiences...Wonderful...:)

[Brave girl]

thank you so much for this great review dear writer :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure. Any time...:)

[Brave girl]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Brave girl]

lol

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...:)

[Brave girl]

you never have enough Sami, don't you?

[Sami Khalil]

Not at all. Bye

[Brave girl]

lol