you are the boss

just wrote it on a rainy day!!

We all wish to be happily ever after

A life full of joy and laughter

And beautiful plants to water

And maybe a smart daughter

But one day you’ll have enough of always being everyone’s joy maker machine

Sometimes you should act like an angry human being

So they’ll know that it will not be okay

And a hug won’t make my day

There’s too much stress that has been absorbed

And the price no one will be able to afford

But you know what,

Just look high in the sky

And try to not cry

Because it’s nothing but a loss

Let them know that you are the boss.

Author's Note

please give me your true opinion!!

Reviews

[Sophy Freebirds]

Making ourselves aware that we own ourself.. :) nice piece of work...

[Brave girl]

thank you,and that was the point ;) lol thanks again forthe review :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Wow ... Awesome, yes .. in our lives, we`re all ourselves boss and we should keep this point in our minds to drink the drops of the cold rain. Your this poem`s so beautiful and inspirational as well .. like few earlier ones ... I loved this poem ;)

[Brave girl]

aw thank you so much,that's very kind :)

[Norma Gonzalez]

I love how you rhyme your sentences...there might be some slight confusion as to the daughter part.....it seems to take off the meaning of all the poem...other than that I can definitely relate to this poem....not always ppl would feel alright with a "everything will be alright" tone....

[Brave girl]

yea thanks alot for the nice review :)

[Rahul]

ok... as you mentioned you want True opinion then i say
this's a true write and here i see the great rhyme, i love the theme, concept and the idea. You've written in a different color that's too nice to a reader to read... I think i should have to read your some more writes, i'm really enjoying your pieces'.

Your tittle looks as an employee says to his/her boss in office. lol. Beautiful write.

[Brave girl]

yea Lol , thanks again and im glad you like my humble poetry

[Rahul]

Your welcome again Lol, you deserved it because you've earned it. You've to write more that's what i think.

[Norma Gonzalez]

I LOVE the fact that u rhymed ur poem........the greatest thing about being a writer is that u make sense to the rhyme.......just like Dr. Seuss.....:D

[Brave girl]

thank you.

[Luke Rawlings]

A good poem, with a nice allegory behind it. Well done! :)

[Brave girl]

thank you dear writer :)

[Tate Morgan]

Oh I know this like all parents yelling at a child hurts us inside and it is hard to do but sometimes theres no other way

[Brave girl]

yeah,thanks for the review Tate. it means a lot!

[Badr Sellak]

reminds me of the early rock lyrics in the 60's and the 70's
magnifique !!

[Brave girl]

thank you =D

[KAin]

A good poem with a good message.
Keep it up!

[Brave girl]

thanks for your kind review!

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Excellent as it is, I like the abstract and rhyme. We do need to realize life is what we create and don't have to live another's dream.

[Brave girl]

sure,thanks for the review!!