Dear mom

it can't show how strong and great my mom is!

 

Dear mom,I’m goinig to stand here

And tell you some facts you’d like to hear

They got used to leave you behind with a question mark,

Never tried to get you out of the dark.

You kept your head up

Even if you didn’t always get the thumbs up…

Though the changing of weather,

I do believe that you and faith will always walk together.

With the words you write

I know how smart you fight

You are so strong

And next to heroes you do belong.

                                You  already made the vow

I don’t know how

But you will survive

And hopefully keep your vibe!

 

 

Author's Note

please review!!

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

Mom's are special and you just made your mother proud you love her with all your heart I see it in the words you have chosen in your sweet poem about Mom nicely done I sure if she has read this she is proud of you as her daughter Beautiful poem

[Brave girl]

Thank you for passing by :)

[Half Dream]

This is a beautiful tribute to your mother. I myself, I can't imagine my life without her. Very well expressed writing and such a sweet note to your mother. I'm sure she is proud of you!! Thanks for sharing dear. :)

[Brave girl]

thank you so much for the nice review!! this really means the world to me =)

[Half Dream]

You're very welcome. :) I really enjoyed reading most of your writing. Keep up the good work. :)

[Brave girl]

................ awesome =D

[Wórdsmíth]

Wow ... what a great tribute you given to your beautiful Mom!! I hope, she`d have loved reading this wonderful write ;)

[Brave girl]

yes she did;thank you so much! :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Wow .. good to know ;) Your welcome, my friend ;)

[Brave girl]

.........:)

[khalid]

mom is the most imprtant person. she always cares without waiting for return.

[Brave girl]

that's right :)

[Luke Rawlings]

A good piece, I enjoyed reading it. Your poems always have that happy note, I think it is your signature :3

[Brave girl]

yea i guess :) thanks for the review

[Keith LaFountaine]

A very touching tribute to mothers. Great work and imagery!

[Brave girl]

thank you so much

[Blue Lotus]

Mothers are giants of love and strenght...
May our own always stand tall..
Some lovely poetry brave .... :)

[Brave girl]

thanks alot Blue lotus!

[Blue Lotus]

...............:) ur wlc

[Baby Ricochet]

A great tribute to moms the world over. No one will ever love you like she does/

[Brave girl]

i know;thanks

[Sami Khalil]

Another refreshing read...Thank you for honoring your mom and sharing...:)

[Brave girl]

you know that you are the only writer who always give me reviews,and i appreciate it...thank you so much :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...I try to encourage people too along with appreciation...:)

[Brave girl]

you're a good person...

[Sami Khalil]

Thank you kindly...:)

[Brave girl]

you are the most welcome dear writer!

[Sami Khalil]

You too...:)

[Sami Khalil]

A great and wonderful tribute to your mom. May she always be your best friend...:)

[Brave girl]

yeah,thanks ! allah ykhaliha li(if you know what i mean)

[Sami Khalil]

May God preserve her. I'm a king of Arabic language too...:)

[Brave girl]

yeah i know that ;p

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)