That girl in the mirror

i hope you'll like it!

There's a girl in the mirror

I wonder who she is

Sometimes I think I know her

And sometimes I wish I did

there's a story in her eyes

lullabies and goodbyes

but when I look in her eyes

I see a girl dying inside

Author's Note

came on breeze,what do u think?

Reviews

[Buddhistboy73]

"there's a girl in the mirror"....to "I see a girl dying inside"....this is your journey in this write. It's as if this girl is confused, lost on her path in this world. There's positivity (lullabies), but I also sense darkness. I hope this girl finds her way to the path of the light, and stands tall in herself, owning her presence and divine right to be happy in life....:)
Great write..

[Brave girl]

thank you so much,i hope that she will one day!

[Wórdsmíth]

Oh well... your emotions have made the write very heartfelt reading along the sides of its painful effects to kind hearts. I must say, you just didn't write a poem but you have opened up your beautiful heart in disguise of your own touching words. Well pen'd! Keep it up! ;)

[Brave girl]

thank you sooo much for the kind words :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Oh my dearest, your most welcome. I am even so pleased to read your nice stuffs ;)

[Brave girl]

............:)

[Wórdsmíth]

Lol.. would you mind if I crave for your one more smile? Lol xoxo ;)

[Brave girl]

hehe be my guest

[Wórdsmíth]

Aww... you are so kind. Thanks for having my heart.. oopps. I literally stated.. thanks for beating my heart. Hahha ;)

[Brave girl]

hmm okey yeah u r welcome i guess

[Wórdsmíth]

Lol.. u r quite fascinating! ;)

[Brave girl]

thank you,even though u still don't know me yet! :/

[Wórdsmíth]

Yeah.. but as far as I read your stuffs jus came to know, having some talk with you, you are quiet fascinating to me, no matter what. I believe, the kindness in person makes a person beautiful as well as very decorative around the world. So, I think you are.

[Brave girl]

okey thank you so much !

[Wórdsmíth]

Am sorry bt am not able to see your smile clearly. .so if u don't mind..can I see/have that smile? ;)

[Brave girl]

hmmm not sure what u mean dear writer??

[Wórdsmíth]

Nothing... I was just meant to see yout smile ..in disguise of *smiley fae* like tis.. ":)" that's what I meant dear friend.

[Brave girl]

okeeey...........:)

[AdorableDreams]

Very sad but I can find ME in this poem (: beautiful written.

[Brave girl]

glad you found yourself;thanks for the review!

[AdorableDreams]

Haha no I found not myself but I found myself in this poem;)

[Brave girl]

lol

[AdorableDreams]

Hahaa:-)

[carol burgess romance]

many times in our lives we look at the person looking out of thr mirror and don't like what we see...short but well wrote

[Brave girl]

thanks

[Sweet Emotions]

I love this. It really reminds me of how I felt at some lower points in my life.

[Brave girl]

good for you!

[Brave girl]

good for you!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

This feels charmingly sad and I found myself trying to work out the female's age, I imagined she was a child, this is a good poem because I could visualise her staring in to the mirror, I really liked

[Brave girl]

I'm glad you liked it,thanks for your review!

[Tate Morgan]

That was sweet like the breeze that created it

[Brave girl]

thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

Mirror , mirror on the wall
who is the fairest of them all?

[Brave girl]

yea,surely not me!!

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Brave girl]

lol

[Sami Khalil]

:):):):):)

[Brave girl]

you never have enough ,do you?

[Sami Khalil]

No. Like a child...:)

[Brave girl]

sure you are!

[Gerald Parker]

An effective little piece - but I don't believe you're dying inside.

[Brave girl]

who knows what a heart can hold ?!

[Gerald Parker]

You know

[Brave girl]

sure i do!

[The Nude Writer]

Very powerful and touching :) great job

[Brave girl]

thanks!