Some girls

I was writing this when I was looking at myself in the mirror!

If every girl was tiny

If every girl was thin

Then there would be no variety!

 

We are all individual

We have laughter lines upon our face

Some of us have dimples

Some of us have natural grace

 

Some girls are quite skinny

Some girls just love their food

Some girls are never happy

Some are permanently in mood!

 

So remember if every girl was identical

If every smile was exact

Then every man would be miserable

And that would be a fact!

 

Because some men go for beauty

Some men go for grace

Some men never take the time

To look at the person behind the face!

So we have to be accepting

We have to controle over our own fate,

So why waste our time

With Mr not so nice…we want Mr Great!

 

So stop criticizing in front of that mirror

Whether you’re fat or thin

It’s time to love yourself again

Your happy life’s about to begin…

 

Because how can someone love you

If you don’t love yourself

That’s how so many people

End up on the shelf

 

So whatever you like

Whether you have confidence or not

Remember you are a female

And just be happy with what you’ve got!!

 

Author's Note

i was that kind of people who really don't have any self estime...I hope it's gone!
I hope you'll enjoy it

Reviews

[RachelReaper]

I think its a great thing that you wrote this poem, and its true. I know a lot of people who will sit there and literally pick themselves apart. I distinctly remember one time sitting at the lunch table with my friend and she said, "My eyelashes are too small!" and I looked at her and said, "Who in the hell is going to take the time to sit there and determine the length of your eyelashes? Now your just looking for a reason to dislike yourself. Stop it."
Anyways, I really enjoyed your poem and its message.

[Brave girl]

glad you liked it,i enjoyed hearing about your friend's "story" :p

[RachelReaper]

lolz

[Brave girl]

yeah lol!!

[Jack Frost]

absolutely adored it ;P great write!

[Brave girl]

glad u liked it =D

[Dhaye]

Hey! This one is for us women to celebrate! I like this 20X. Yes! Love thyself...:)
Good rhyming. Nice poem. :)

[Brave girl]

thanks,i'm glad you like it!

[Sami Khalil]

There is so much wisdom in your words ...This is a very nice write...:)

[Brave girl]

thank you dear writer...it's very kind!

[Brave girl]

thank you dear writer...it's very kind!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Brave girl]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

^~^^ :)

[Brave girl]

ehehhehe you never have enough

[Sami Khalil]

No. At least it brought a smile to your face...:)

[Brave girl]

yes it sure did,thannks for that!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Buddhistboy73]

Compassionate, heartfelt piece acknowledging the beauty of variety in life and people. I feel the heart behind this piece..:)
and I love the final stanza.

Uplifting.....:)
BB

[Brave girl]

thanks!

[Buddhistboy73]

You're welcome....:)

[Sweet Emotions]

I love this too. I had an eating disorder in high school and this is so uplifting.

[Brave girl]

hehehe i never had that but i feel bad for those who did !

[SHEEMA HUQ]

there is something very personable about your writing, clear and interesting

[Brave girl]

thank you !

[Mariam]

it's lovely!thanks for sharing

[Blue Belle]

Funny, inspiring, and true. Great work! :)

[Brave girl]

thank you,i'm glad you like it :)