Stand by me

Would you stand by me when the world has turned their back?

Would you hold my hand?

 When I am under attack

 

When you say forever do you mean it

With your heart?

Do you mean that no one

Could pull us two apart

 

Will you take me in your arms when my tears are flowing free

Even when the reason why

You can’t even see

 

Will you everyday come and kiss my cheek

Sing when I am strong

Love when I am weak

 

I’ll not be young forever ,my hair will soon turn gray

But I’ll still love you then

As much as I do today.

Author's Note

i hope you will understand my point :)

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. This can be turned into a song. Just need some music...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Brave girl]

thanks for the review dear writer!

[Sami Khalil]

You are most welcome...:)

[Brave girl]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Sweet Emotions]

I like the theme, but your sporadic use of question marks bothers me. Why do some questions have question marks and not others?

[Brave girl]

typo mistakes! sorry cuz it bothers you

[Wórdsmíth]

That's really a lovely write, i don't understand your point, or say i do understand your point, then let me think about it.
but, in light of all these facts i liked rhymin' ...it looks you love to write in rhymin' way.
simplicity is there i saw, well written, overall package was good.
good luck for your next writin'...

[Brave girl]

thank you so much dear writer;i really enjoy getting a such great reviews like this

[Wórdsmíth]

Really...then how my review won't great, you're damn great in your pic if it's you..then my review for pretty one's always b great

[Brave girl]

it is me actually,thanks but i'm not that pretty! but thanks anyway

[byPatKeegan]

Another great one. I personally like the rhyming type of poetry, and the words are very straightforward and meaningful. Some poetry is so "meta" it's hard to follow, but the beauty in this is the simplicity and the sincerity of the message. Great work!

[Brave girl]

thank you,it's good that you like it!

[The Nude Writer]

That is wonderful :) very pure words :)

[Brave girl]

glad u like it

[Tate Morgan]

Very beautiful thought and prose

[Brave girl]

thanks :)

[Holly Mason]

point taken
you have constructed this nicely
it reads with warm questioning thoughts behind it
title made me curious
thank you for sharing

[Brave girl]

thanks for the great review!

[Luke Rawlings]

I like this poem, it is sweet like the love you offer to your subject. I really liked the verse "Will you take me in your arms when my tears are flowing free
Even when the reason why
You can’t even see"
But I would suggest cutting the first line on the third and first verse in half, it would flow better. :)

[Brave girl]

thanks for the advice

[Brave girl]

please tell me what you think!!