the suicide plan

a lot of people's lives....

Razor,razor

blood red,

knife to wrist,

gun to head,

just one pull, 

just one touch,

that's all to say,

i've had enough....

just one pill 

just one tear,

by now my death is almost here,

just one note in my hand

it's called"the suicide plan.

Author's Note

i'd like to see some reviews :)

Reviews

[Jake Donald Stephens]

This is me right now, unfortunately. :(
Your poems are very good, very well thought out.

[byPatKeegan]

very cool (considering the topic of course). I'm not much into critiquing poetry, because frankly, i don't think i have that skill, but when they move me, I leave a comment :). Good job!

[Brave girl]

i'm glad it moved you,thanks for the review!

[Luke Rawlings]

I think this poem starts a little conflicted, but becomes much better near the end. I like it :)

[Brave girl]

glad you like it Luke :)

[Blue Belle]

I like the rhyming and how it's short and simple. I'm sorry you have felt this way.

[Brave girl]

it's not about me ,but it's about someone very dear to my heart !

[first second third]

this is very good, ihope this just a poem and nothing more, there will bemany lost if you acted apon this poem. other than that this is very good.

[Brave girl]

^thank you ,and i assure it's nothing but a peom :)

[first second third]

ok, good thank you for the piece of mind:) this is a good poem though. feel free to look at some of mine and tell me what you think:)

[Brave girl]

okey i sure will :)

[first second third]

awsome:) happy readingand writing:)

[Brave girl]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

Do you have a love plan for him...:)

[Brave girl]

for who?

[Sami Khalil]

Your future valentine...?

[Brave girl]

no, not really;lol why do you ask?

[Sami Khalil]

I was kidding to make you smile . It looks like you were depressed...:)

[Brave girl]

okey thanks :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Brave girl]

=D

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Brave girl]

lol!

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. Lol .

[Brave girl]

we're never gonna stop,aren't we?!

[Sami Khalil]

Yep . Bye

[Brave girl]

lol!!

[Gerald Parker]

I hope you are not thinking of committing suicide. If you are, read my poem 'Human Rights March' before you do!

[Brave girl]

no surely i don't plan to do that,i have a very big faith on God and I still have a lot of things to do in life...but sometimes people think about such stuff :(

[Gerald Parker]

Voltaire said (and I agree with him): Si Dieu n'existait pas, il faudrait l'inventer.'

[Brave girl]

mais Dieu existe et je l'en crois ...je suis musulmane deja :)

[Gerald Parker]

Believing is only believing.

[Brave girl]

yep !

[Gerald Parker]

Ca va, alors.

[Brave girl]

Mdr,oui c'est cool ;quand et comment tu as étusdié du français?

[Gerald Parker]

A l'universite. Apres, j'ai ete prof de francais. Je commence a tout oublier.

[Brave girl]

c'est fort bien,pour moi c'est ma deuxième langue alors c'est nécessaire!