i'm the girl

inspired of a life of a builled girl!

i'm the girl who sits at the back

i'm the girl who always hides

i'm the girl that nobody speaks to.

i'm the girl with no freind by my side

i'm the girl who doesn't care

i'm the girl who doesn't speak

i'm the girl who's pushed around

i'm the girl they all call weak

i'm the girl who gets no peace

i'm the girl who gets no sleep

i'm the girl all alone

i'm the girl who sits and weeps

i'm the girl who lives in fear

i'm the girl who has no use

i'm the girl that tries to smile

i'm the girl that they abuse

i'm the girl who has no life 

i'm the girl who wants to run

i'm the girl who needs her pain to end.

Author's Note

i honor your critisism

Reviews

[silasa]

the scenrio culd b changd! if v wnt!

[Brave girl]

why would I change it?!

[silasa]

so i jst... meant b changing dat scene!

[Brave girl]

ya sure,maybe when "that girl" will get over her pain! :)

[silasa]

yeah! dat wuld b d positive aspect :)

[Brave girl]

yep!

[Holly Mason]

and the girl will grow into an amazing woman who has such a keen perception of the world around her
because of the girl she was in her youth
look at your pic you are amazing you fill the need for sunshine
stronger and stronger you are becoming
keep up all the good writing!!!
thank you for the open honest way you write*)

[Brave girl]

thank you so much for your supporting review! and i hope that i will over come someday everything that's pulling me back!

[khalid]

very sad depressing and frustrating feelings expressed in a nice way. i think if you mean yourself by this poem, you would better have more confidence on yourself, look at the sweet sides, look at the full part of the glass, look at your nice poetry..it is enough to make you say..i am the girl..who is really proud.

[Brave girl]

some of it is about me ,some isn't but sometimes i am very proud of myself at least when i see 20on20 on my test paper :p but thank you for your support!

[khalid]

be always proud..

[Brave girl]

i 'll try :)

[khalid]

you have too

[Brave girl]

okey ,okey :p

[Glee]

I picture a girl who is shy and reserved but she is not weak, definitely has some use and has a life though she may not know it. There is nothing wrong with being different.

[Brave girl]

i know :)

[gcp]

the repetition works well - it might be even better if you broke the pattern for just one line - to make one stand out.

little typo: freind = friend?

[Brave girl]

i have mistaken,thanks for reading! :)