you lost me

it's just the bottom line of a silly experience!

you came into my life

even that I neverv met you

I knew you'll make me suffert

you said the first words

I was chocked,

you kept on talking like an angel....

I couldn't resist

pass the days,stronger my feelings are for you

I don't know what you used to do

but you've done it well

I was under your spell

you tried to kill me with goodbye...

Are you happy now?  

Author's Note

I would love to see some reviews!!

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

Awww ... I hate this word "Goodbye" ... lol

Hey, I find a error of spelling in a word so, you can re-fix them all ..
In this line .. "I knew you'll make me suffert" .. The word`s "Suffer" not "Suffert" Overall`s awesome. Nice poem but very painful.

[Brave girl]

thanks and i do have a lot of typos :/

[Wórdsmíth]

Your welcome .. Oh I see, hope such typos`d be go with the winds someday .. Ha! ;)

[Brave girl]

yep that'd be great!

[Wórdsmíth]

Yeah, me too can understand the feelings of such typos ... even it happens to me too sometimes and the feelings of loneliness attacks on me and yea .. it`s very hard to get off those feelings of loneliness easily ;)

[Brave girl]

yea tell me about it! ouf it sucks!!

[Wórdsmíth]

Yeah .. when I don`t get words to write .. the feelings of writer`s block always stuck in my mind and put me into the feelings of loneliness all the time but when as the time pass out, everything becomes clear --- all roots clean ;) And yeh .. you well said, it really sucks ;)

[Brave girl]

yep that's life though!

[Wórdsmíth]

Yes .. and I think, we all learn from it much --- ourselves!!

[Brave girl]

that's foresure :)

[Luke Rawlings]

An emotive poem. I like the way you describe the feelings, it appeals in a simple, yet resonant way. :)

[Brave girl]

thanks for reading :)

[Sami Khalil]

A very heartfelt write that has some love and blame in for the beloved. Well penned

[Brave girl]

thank you,i was digging so deep to write this!

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. Please keep digging . No telling what you will find...:)

[Brave girl]

i didn't understand what you really mean by"no telling what you will find"?!!

[Sami Khalil]

In other words . You will find a lot of surprises. Slang talk...:)

[Brave girl]

ya,life is full of surprises!! i like surprises but not all of them!!

[Sami Khalil]

As you like or choose...:)

[Brave girl]

of course!