live your life

If any one would ask me what life is for me,I would say that life is about being respectful towards those who respect you back,it's doing your homework but also have fun,it's being totally true with your self,never tell your secrets to ant random person but,still you shoold search for a freind to be there for you to releif you from the pain of not being able to tell what bothers you to someone...And the most important is to be commited to God and to do anything and everything so God will actually be happy of who you really are regardless of what people think about you.

live the day like it's your last:have fun,make a step ahead towards your goal,and never forget to pray that God would help you :D 

Author's Note

it's just something I was writing while i'm bored...so tell me what you guys think! :)

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

I read this write again so, am gonna review this again. This stage-play`s very nice, it reminds me how a person makes mistakes in his life and how he holds true to himself keeping some faith in his own life. Very nice play. It`s quiet insightful to me and I love such pieces to read. Keep it up! ;)

[Brave girl]

thank u,that's sweet :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Your welcome my sweet friend. Hey, are you still working on this stage-play? I meant, Are you making some plans to continue this ...? Actually, i`m curious to read some more from you on this topic ;)

[Brave girl]

umm i've been thinking about it :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Happy to hear it! Well.. If you want then I can be your partner for completing this lovely insightful project. I meant, if you say.. we can make this play complete working on it together. Actually... i`m very excited to do work with you especially on this project. I`m not sure, how it sounding to you but let me hear what your opinions are? ;)

[Brave girl]

ummm it's sounds good...i guess =)

[Wórdsmíth]

Oh that`s amazing to hear. Umm.. so, shall we start working on it today or by tom.? ;)

[Brave girl]

idk really

[Wórdsmíth]

Lol... Anyway, I think, i`m excited to work with you. You don`t seem the same .. like curious to working with me at all so.. i`m just going to work on this write right and within the next few couple of hours .. i`ll send you the script via mail and I hope you`d appreciate it ;) Good luck with your stuffs! Keep writing! ;)

[Brave girl]

yeah i just have alot of work already

[Wórdsmíth]

It`s very thoughtful play. I like the inspiration you sent by your wonderful words to this world. I find some errors in this line .. you can re-rix it if you`d like to ...

You can write to write this line ... "You shoold search for a freind to be there for you to releif you from the pain of not being able to tell what bothers you to someone..." ... in this way ...

"You should search for a friend to be there for you to get some relief from the pain of not being able to tell what bothers you to someone..."

Overall is very nice and wonderful. It`s enjoyable to read. XD

[Brave girl]

oh u read this,i hate this one;it was just a stupid little paragraph!

[Wórdsmíth]

Lol .. yeh, I read this and yeah .. it`s looked like a paragraph but yeah, it`s good to read because the statements you put with contexts are very beautiful. Hey, do you want to write or add few more lines in this play?? ;)

[Brave girl]

nope i hate it; i don't even want to know it exist !! but thanks anyway!

[Wórdsmíth]

Lol .. your welcome!

[Brave girl]

.............. :)

[Holly Mason]

nice thoughts
do unto others as you would have done to yourself-respecting-relaxing to read
like that you do your homework*)
live the day like it's your last
thank you for sharing

[Brave girl]

thanks for the support!

[Luke Rawlings]

A good thought provoking piece of text, I would say this is a really good first draft for a poem. Just a thought :P

[Brave girl]

lol ;thanks !

[zainul]

Nice effort.
You may try to correct the grammatical mistakes.

[Brave girl]

yea you're right sorry, i know that i'm a loser :(

[zainul]

Thanks a lot,dear friend.
I am sure you will win,you shall overcome.
You may express your real identity and work sincerely to win a place in this site.
Best wishes,
Zainul

[Brave girl]

thank you so much for caring!

[zainul]

All of us in this site care for each other.

[Brave girl]

yes i do notice!

[zainul]

Then get inspired.
Have a smile.
Write something to smile yourself and make smile others.

[Brave girl]

i'm still trying!

[zainul]

Hope you will be successful.

[Brave girl]

thank you :)

[zainul]

:)

[Brave girl]

=D

[Blue Lotus]

nice thoughts!

[Brave girl]

thanks!

[Blue Lotus]

;)

[Brave girl]

:)

[Blue Lotus]

oh and your far from a loser... your a beautiful young woman with beautiful thoughts. it pains me to see you think of yourself as a loser. i assume english is not your first language so that makes things much harder.. keep on writing exploring and learning you'll soon pick up ;)

[Brave girl]

thank you so much and yes it's not my first language:my first is arabic,my second is french,english,and i know spanich cause i love it!
thanks again!