Flammen

 

Claws scraping,

grazing,

scratching,

those terrible wounds.

Salty tears                      drip, drop,

Filming scorched eyes.

 

Bulbous windows of horror,

Tightly shut before terrible angels.

Reviews

[J.Black]

Well said.

[PianoandPage]

*shivers* ok.... much kudos for "terrible angels"

of course you could interpret this in different ways but for me i saw
a poetic description of a trauma involving birds, perhaps crows or blackbirds attacking.

also i loved the line, "filming scorched eyes"