The Infinite Way

Goodbye cities, goodbye society, goodbye roads...

I'm flying to...the moon, stars, oz, who knows

But be assured it's a place without an end,

where a road doesn't exist, 

because roads eventually do end,

But a place, where tangibility and imagination coincide,    

where exist an unfixed route that merely travels within, 

where expectations are boundless  

and bigotry and ignorance aren't a trend. 

I'm going to write of course.

Reviews

[Taeko Shimizu]

It's exactly how I feel when I begin to the write. Half of the stories I wrote don't even have an end yet. Not sure if I want to let it end. Your poem is enchanting nevertheless.

[Derek Cummings]

I know this is a 11 months old, but thanks for the read and feedback. I have hard time letting my stories end. That's why there are sequels!

[Sami Khalil]

I like this poem especially the lines:
where a road doesn't exist,
because roads eventually do end.
A lot of wisdom in this write.

[Derek Cummings]

Thanks for the read. Where one road ends, may a another be created, figuratively speaking of course:)

[Sami Khalil]

Yep . You are welcome .

[ObscurityNone]

The ending brings it all together in one sudden realization and furthermore, an explanation of what is truly going on here. Seldom do you see those reveal the meaning behind a poem and making such an impact with it. Kudos.

[Derek Cummings]

Thanks for the review. Peace.

[Prince Ashlityr]

I love the break from common rhyme schemes, it provides heaps more emphasis than otherwise provided

[Derek Cummings]

Yea. I like to mix it up. Thanks for the comment.

[ATG]

A very well done poem. I really enjoyed the overall message behind it.

[Derek Cummings]

Thanks for the comment...

[sharonlee]

It works for me... poetry is my greatest love.

[Derek Cummings]

Thanks Sharon!

[An owl on the moon]

This path of your mindscape brings the imagination to life... creates a mood of rising, fluttering hope.... Here is endless possibility and life's great mystery.

[Derek Cummings]

Well said Craig.

[Derek Cummings]

I felt the flow of this one and wrote it free style and unedited