Do you feel me...

Teetering…

on that prolific edge of mediocrity

Groping…

like some street-ravaged w***e in the darkness

Clinging…

to that abstract formality of "us"

Drowning…

as you lie, complacent, in your nothingness

Reviews

[Zöe Selemane-Kiang..]

oh gosh, this is simple yet the words are deep cutting, the shortness of the lines make the point even more piercing. tis so good.

(:

[InkSlinger]

Ouch, painful.. bitter and resentful.. but brilliantly conveyed, and composed.. The short one word sentences give power, creating drama and help sell this lil' piece.. well done!