The Boy With Flowers

A short poem from my book.

You are pain. 

Red, stabbing, deep. 

As the sun breaks, it bleeds for you. 

But you suffocate it with your words.

It's never enough. 

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Author's Note

(c) 2014 Britney S. Lewis

Reviews

[Patricia]

I read it a few times and every time it gets better. With every reading it got more alive, hurtful, tragic, so amazing

[Angad Waraich]

Wow!
You managed to capture immense amount of depth in just 5 lines.
It was amazing
Thank you for sharing

[Britney S. Lewis]

Thank You!

[Melliflower]

This is beautiful... so intoxicating and and meaningful, within such a short amount of lines. Thank you so much for friend requesting me- It's an honour to have you within my friend list. Your work is beautiful! x

[Britney S. Lewis]

Well goodness gracious, thank you. I had no idea it would hold this effect on you, or anyone else for that matter.
And, I am more than honored to have you as a friend as well!

[Myle Rent]

Brief yet meaningful indeed.

[Britney S. Lewis]

Thank you!

[Adreamer's Bluejay]

This is absolutely beautiful in its own way. I love the unique method of story telling you used and the strength this piece has. Great job penning something simple so completely flawlessly.

[Britney S. Lewis]

Haha! Well, you're amazing! Thank you! We should be friends!

[Ciara Evelyn Silver]

Wow... nice wording. I read it like 6 times. :)

[Britney S. Lewis]

Aw thanks, You're amazing!