Indescribable

What started as a line, barely a couple of phrases

Ended up with me spilling out a couple of pages.

I wrote it all, describing you in all of your phases

What I'm really trying to say is, you're just really that amazing

I started with your eyes and the array in which they glisten

finishing with your thighs that remind me of everything I'm missing

They say there's other fish in the sea, but honestly I'm done fishing

I wouldn't be able to sum you up if I was a mathematician

It's the way you're so elegant, the way you're so intelligent

It's the way you make everything else so irrelevant

It's the way God made you with all the right elements

I could've sworn the day I saw you, I just knew then you are heaven sent.

Reviews

[Ioana Mihai]

Beautiful poem, elegant your writing too, I like the way you express yourself, the way you write….

[Muhammad]

I sincerely appreciate your kind thoughts on my work, Ioana. Thank you.

[Neg]

You did a real good job describing in this poem. Good job, I'll be reading more of your work.

[Misty Blue Eyes]

the way you describe things, its unreal, great work keep going

[Greg Skura]

You created the word and the beauty! Nicely done! I enjoyed this poem very much!

[darkgurl]

This is truly remarkable writing! I enjoyed the sincerity of this write. You have style. Like the flow and rhyme scheme. Very well written.

[Adelia Alighieri]

As long as it describes your 'indescribable' thoughts, nothing else matters really.
I like this, keep writing.