Faith

Faith

A Poem by Muhammad

Before you know it, it’s that day again
We sit here gathered in rows of 10
For this day only comes once a week
As we slowly approach the weekend's peek

The preacher speaks in words so true
Deep down I wonder “If only they knew”
That this is the message we really send
The same message the media bends

Its funny we say we’re after their bombs
When we ourselves have bigger ones
Sometimes I look at the innocent eyes
I guess 8 years is what it took us to realize

I see this war as a book with endless chapters
Sometimes I wonder if we’ve forgotten what we’re after
Its almost as if we can’t separate wrong from right
I just wish 1000’s of innocent didn’t have to pay the price

But despite this fact, somewhere in this world
Laying under a jeep, scared and curled
There’s a boy with no food on his plate
With more fear in his heart but even greater faith

So even though the death tolls continue to climb
And the rich can’t spare the poor a dime
I’ll always keep this thought in mind
“If he can believe, why can’t I?”

© 2022 Muhammad


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I like the modern touch to it which is something that separates this poem, of a common title, from all its namesakes. Very well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Faith-Perfect title for this poem.

Very heartfelt, straight to the point. Thanks for sharing this write with us. Very important messages!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

eh I don't like the part about the war, but without getting into politics...the overall message was delivered in a stylish fashion, and the poem was extremely well written.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah! This was so thoughtful and inspiring.
I was really feeling a little down, but after reading this I'm feeling much much better!
Great write :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is an amazing & enlightening write. the flow is amazing & the message is so very true. i love those last 2 stanzas. how i can relate to this piece. i often envy those with such unshakable faith in whatever god they believe in. a brilliant write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that was the most loviest poem i have ever read

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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