A MESSAGE IN THE WIND

our world has something to tell us

A Message In The Wind

 

The weather is quite below freezing

I feel a chill right through my bones

The wind outside is angry

I can tell by it's howling groans

I wonder why the wind is so angry

Is it tired from it's forceful night

One would think that it would lessen

And give up some of it's fight

Maybe it is trying to tell us

A message we might need to learn

The days are changing around us

Shall we heed and give concern?

Have we taken advantage of days past

Treated them with so little care

As the wind blows around debris

Left by us, we put it there

Maybe it's anger is fueled

As it blows across the earth

By the way we have treated our land

As if it didn't have much worth

Maybe it is trying to tell us

To think twice before we destroy

And once again treat our land precious

Revealing it's beauty to give our hearts joy

 

Reviews

[DONALD EISSLER]

Again you seem to pick the words from the heavens they flow so well from your hand ... express yourself so witingly and yet with such passion that I am always amazed how you do it..... think i'll give you 9.99 on this one wink
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[A. Bennett]

You've quickly become one of my favorite poets with your rhythm and rhyme. The message behind this is one we all need to pay attention to and I appreciate the wind being the messenger. It's another beautiful piece that flows smoothly, yet still holds something erratic and intriguing.