tonight

I will

touch

you 

 

tonight

 

I am alone

far from you

but still

I

know how

to

kiss

you

 

tonight

 

my lips

seek the taste

wet

and

bitten by  

need 

to follow

 

tonight

 

and

trace 

your

sweet 

tongue lingering

where

ever

you 

choose 

to           

 

tonight

 

tiny pulses 

finger 

my 

flesh 

easing

towards 

you

 

tonight

 

I explore    

intentions

you 

won’t 

want 

escape

from                    

 

tonight

 

lie back 

bridge the gap

the door 

will

open

be

tween 

us   

 

tonight

         

drawing my breath

finding your heat

offering 

a 

ride

in 

my

rhythm    

 

tonight

 

bring me into

your dreams       

for 

you will

know

when

I

please        

you                     

 

tonight        

        

blue light

takes me 

over

and over

three

times 

taking me

over          

 

tonight

 

I collapse 

into

you

don’t 

want 

to let go         

but you are 

not

here

 

tonight

 

and           

this ache

is very 

real             

 

tonight

 

feel what you can

memory 

is all

you will touch

      

 

tonight

 

my

soul

is

yours

to

sleep

with

 

 

 

                  

 

tonight

 

 

 

 

.

 

Reviews

[J D Roland]

I explore
intentions
you
won�t
want
escape
from

Excellent stanza. Beautiful play on fantasy. Well delivered.

[Rei]

This piece was easy to read good form. I loved it, the passion and emotion of great affection and lust for another. It was a treat to read and sent goosebumps through my body.

[Mishel Rosario Reyes]

tonight has so much meaning, and hope and loss, ----great write,
====MIshel

[Barry S. Maltese]

Pure love reaches across the distance. Be it in a dream, or just the hearts ability to hold onto the part of it that leaves with the one it has melded with through it's passion. It is love in it's essence when distance is inconsequential, because they can feel them there within their thoughts and feelings. Very entertaining reading.

[Dave]

Woah...pretty heavy stuff! Had my heart racing too.
The anticipation brought on by the structure of the write was done very well.
Nice job!!!