I admit

 You, being who you are 

 

 

are still

where you should be

 

alone yeah, damn you are within alright

 

 

but so

much encompassing the entire

circumference

 

 

 

in every direction

 

you 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

still are

 

 

 

where you

 

 

 

 

 

you should

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

be

Reviews

[wiccaceltica]

This poem is about the aftermath of love. The person will always be a part of you. Sometimes like a little seed lying dormant, alone. Sometimes a full blown case consuming you whole. Sort of like Lyme Disease :-) And, no matter how much you fight it or how much time has past.. you have to admit to yourself that they came into your life for a reason and there they remain, who they are, who you are.. just as it should be. Thanks for reading :-)

[Donni]

I like this piece. I have just a little bit of confusion about one line "alone yeah, damn you are within alright"
what does that mean? within alright? It is probably something so simple and I just can't see it. The poem lends to wanting some answers, to know "the story behind the story" so puts this in my Provocative file! Donni

[Shadow Writer]

This was a good deep write that causes one to think. Enjoyed.........Phantom...........

[Barry S. Maltese]

I wonder who's life you are examining?! An ex-lover? Old flame?? I am happy for them. It must be great to be 100% of where you should be - "all your ducks in order". I also wonder if that is a mere facad?! Is he covering up the emptiness that dwells inside of him/or herself/ brought forth from the cost of success?!!
Nicely written. You have always been a woman of GREAT style.