someday

 

 

 

i sail as if on t i n g l i n g wings

amazed at how 

we 

fit

 

word upon word

each

its own

song

left to 

d

i

s

t

a

n

t

choirs

as memory called

to make 

me

smile

 

 

the day

to

come

we t o u c h

with more than song

but flesh

is 

in

our

stars

 

 

a

n

d

smiles

are 

into eyes

with soft

embrace of heart

 

in now

twirling song

of

 

l

o

v

e

 

 

 

.

 

Reviews

[Barry S. Maltese]

Love expressed so well, so clearly. Both your words, and your presentation are multi-demensional. Nice work. A very enjoyable reading experience.

[Dave]

How sweet. Not much really to critique except that this is quite a lovely love poem. Thanks for sharing.