The One

I just wrote this song for the fun of it.Follow me on Twitter @MrGhostStories.

They say you are one of a kind, girl
and you might blow my mind, girl
like you will wreck my boat
like you will rock my world

On this island girl, you are all mine
In my mind, you are my world

Because you are one of a kind, girl
and you always on time, girl
like you steal my thoughts
like you wreck my world

In this world girl, you are all mine
In my mind, you rock my boat

Because you are one of a kind, girl
and you always on time, girl
like you steal my thoughts
like you blow my mind

like you wreck my boat
like you rock my world

Reviews

[Abhilash Hegde]

This one reads like a song.. :)
Girls do that to you, blow our minds, wreck our boats and rock our worlds.
They are the best things that can happen to you!
This poem reads like a homage to special someone.
I like these lines, very imaginative..
"On this island girl, you are all mine
In my mind, you are my world"

Thanks for sharing!

[James Paranormal]

Thanks man, I appreciate the feedback, this could be talking about a big fat joint, tbh.

[Betty Hermelee]

This reads almost like a hip hop song. I can hear the beat in the background…sounds pretty nice…. It’s not so easy to write this kind of piece, very musical….and full of love….
Best
Betty

[Dave]

Sounds like she is really something special. A once in a lifetime dream come true.
Take care - Dave