Lost Moment

The moment you forget.

Mind wanders with regret.

Eyes blurred, lose focus.

“What’s my current purpose?”

Is spontaneous enough?

Chasing a dream, tough.

As a child we rushed,

what was all the fuss?

The lost moment finds.

The lost moment unwinds.

The lost moment reminds.

Messes with our minds.

In that moment there is clarity.

We connect with our reality.

Endless possibilities.

Test our comfortability.

A chance to breathe.

Rebirth and see.

Are we where, 

we want to be?

Take that lost moment,

to reset your focus.

To find yourself and

your new found purpose.

Reviews

[WolfRReaper (Lilith/Ale..]

Interesting piece (Dont mind if i mispelled that please) a nice couplet style which i dont see too often on here. Its very nice :) im sure theres probably little things you could fix as there always are with these things. I couldnt tell you what though to be honest even after writing for a couple years im still new to poetry. Anyway good job all in all i hope to read more of your work later.

[Krizito]

nice rhyming - totally enjoyed that; it just flowed really easy. i like to think my days move so fast, i probably lose a lot - of moments - chasing it; so i try hard to correct that - get with my lost moment.
really nice poem: truly.

[RoadPoet]

Nice poem and good cadence. I'm a fan of rhyming poems and yours is good. I know a few of those lost moments and am glad I recognised their value, which you captured in rhyme.

[Nebula]

A lost moment for a new start