the fall

its about the maintainance of dignity

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The fall

 

I don’t want to see you suffocate

Nor I want you to feel tortured

My eyes give you pain

Dripping blood

Causing stains

Tired of bare nothing

Not even a drop of hope

I believe in getting

That’s what I call

The higher we rise

Greater the fall

 

Now, now don’t stop me with the bonds of regret

Let go of me with all due respect

 

Me staying here longer

Will make you weaker

I have caused enough

Your wounds won’t cease

Until I leave

So let me fall

That would be all 

 

 

Reviews

[Dinesh Sairam]

A good poem :) But can be improvised a lot. Anyways, this is ok for a first poem.. :) And welcome to Writer's Cafe. I'm sure you'll find something of interest here :)

PS. You're not supposed to review your own poems, lol.

[mystique]

well thanks i have taken dem as advice n not comments its goood to know people like it

[3OH!3]

this poem is amazing i really like it there is something different to this poem. it isnt like others grate job

[DannyLynne Riley]

This poem is incredibly beautiful I love the ending and also the pic added a nice element...well done

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Good poem, it has something different to say that easily comes out while reading this poem. In the second line, it should be 'Nor do I...'
great poem :)

[mystique]

well its my expressions