My Lost Identity

mental condition of a struggling boy.....

Looking back I have found that I have lost myself

Burdens were on and things were turning down

I felt I should move on but I was trapped down

with the curse of people I become very feeble

I was knocked to hell

nobody was there to listen to my appeal  ogod o god lead me from the oblivion of materiality

to conscious vitality because

I have lost my identity

I have lost my identity

With the crystal tears of persistence

I tried to tackle my resistance

but the darkness of my mind

made me do lots of crime

everybody was shocked

and I was mocked

people were giving me sympathy because 

I have lost my identity 

I have lost my identity

Leaving behind the wave of illusion

I have to do another creation

Time is not yet lost

I have trust in god

I have to achieve many milestones in my life

for which I have to strive

I have to built my name in the city

coz I have lost my identity

I have lost my identity

~~ AVINASH PATHAK

Author's Note

ignore grammar mistake. ... as I am not perfectionist in writing poem

Reviews

[Pax]

When you expect much, you’ll fall hard & much to loss. When you expect less, you’ll fall much easier & perhaps receive the unexpected.

Expectations drives us crazy but it also drives our will to keep on track in life. We just have to remember how to used it in a well balance ways. Good or bad situations comes with great wisdom to learning.

All in All, expectation is not at all bad, it only becomes bad if you expect too much... Balance is an important key aspect on how to handle our life...

Also, darkness will always be around the corner. It depends if you let them engulf your being... Self-control and never losing hope are what keeping a person's life intact... You'll never lose your Identity if you just believed in God and in yourself...

very nice piece...

[mystiqueavi009]

this is my first poem... hope u wil like it....