there counting on you/ I'm not perfect

there counting on you/ I'm not perfect

A Poem by Fatema

when you look around
what do you see?
well I see everyone's looking at me
as if they're all counting on me
were they expecting me to get everything
right
well I'm not perfect
no one is
but...
there counting on me
and I can't let them down
but the should know that I am
not perfect
no one is

© 2017 Fatema


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Only God is perfect, so we need not expect so much of others or ourselves. Valentine

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is great, but be careful of '?', if you intentionally wanted to omit that; well done. other than that; great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fatema

8 Years Ago

thank you, but what do you mean by '' but be careful of ''?

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Added on March 5, 2016
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Fatema
Fatema

NYC, NY



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i love to read other peoples' poems and stories as much as i like to write poems and stories. i always read my sister poems and stories. these poems and stories inspire me. also i 'm 8 years old. A.. more..

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