The Sun and The Moon.

The sun shines bright, for the moon's light.

The moon only sheds its' light on dark, gloomy nights.

The sun wants to stay.

The moon wants to go.

The moon goes away, leaves the sun all alone.

The sun can't complain it was only a game.

The moon will stay cold, selfish, and lonely.

Still, the sun thinks "if only, if only."

Reviews

[Kristin]

The combination of the sun and the moon is amazing. I love how innocent this poem is, I really enjoyed it!

[Liz-z]

So beautiful... Comparing the sun and the moon... So beautiful... I love it.
Favorite lines:
"The sun shines bright, for the moon's light,"
In some weird way that made sense to me.... :)
"The sun wants to stay.
The moon wants to go"
It does seem like that doesn't it?
"The moon will stay cold, selfish, and lonely.
Still the sun things "if only, if only"
Amazing last few lines! I love it! :D