Gone in Blue

Gone in Blue

A Poem by Ian Richard
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For the one that I loved.

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I could never tell, how happy my feeling would be...
Every single time I see your smile.
I could never tell, how glad my heart would be...
Every single day, I think of you.
I could never tell, how dark my days would be...
If I ever see you upset.
I could never tell, how gloom my life would be...
If I ever see you sad.

Perhaps I've fallen for her before,
but I pretended not to care.
Maybe I've given her a hope of love before,
but I pretended as if it was just a phase.
Til' one day, I couldn't stop thinking of her,
just when I realized that I've lost her forever.

In the end, I learned that I never be the player #2.
In the end, I learned that love is only giving me blue.
Therefore, my feelings were never true.

For tears I shed never worth the wait,
and the love I made never grow in faith.

Though, my life keeps on turning...
It only believes in one thing,
my love for you will never go blue.

© 2016 Ian Richard


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This sends so much feelings. I hope that both of you will find ways to see each other again without pain in your hearts.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ian Richard

8 Years Ago

Yeah... Thank you so much MachoMind :D... your review is so fantastic.. I like it
Wow deep. Very good job. This is wonderful.i wish i could write like this with such heart.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ian Richard

8 Years Ago

Thank you, of course you can. I'd like to read much more of your poems :D
Lord of mad men

8 Years Ago

Sorry for the two clone posts my phone messed up.

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Ian Richard
Ian Richard

Karawang, Jawa Barat, Indonesia



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