Creeping Shadow

Creeping Shadow

A Poem by The Night Poet

Creeping Shadow

Along the corridors of loneliness
I follow a slowly creeping shadow
of a flickering dying candle

It reflects every curve of each memory
creeping slowly with a desperate desire

The shadows continue down the long narrow corridors
silently echoing the wick's pleading
for a flame never ending

The flames once danced passionately
Stretching and arching backward in blissful splendor
Burning full and bright glowing upon their dream

Dreams of plump, succulent lips trembling
to touch each blossom of its branches quivering for more
Then soothed from each drop of rain
that kissed away its thirst


Plunging deep inside their field of poppies
where dreams were long and blissful
are slowly reflected one by one
inside its dying soul tonight

The shadows continue down the long narrow corridors
silently echoing the wick's pleading
for a flame never ending

Along the corridors of loneliness
I follow a slowly creeping shadow
of a flickering dying candle

 

© 2018 The Night Poet


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Flames... This is deep.
Fire. Flames. Shadows

Posted 5 Years Ago


The Night Poet

5 Years Ago

My dear Christa,
The greatest desire of our soul is deep inside, buried by our automatic unco.. read more
Laconic Meraki

5 Years Ago

Namaste 🖤💌💫
My visions of this were of a very lonely man, wishing and dreaming of someone to fulfill his heart, his desire. He sees the flickering light casting shadows of itself and of the one carrying it and he's enticed to follow. Low and behold, it's another lonely heart filled with desire. The candle's desire is to live longer, for its heart, the wick, to burn forever if for no other reason than to watch the two lovers fulfill their desire in the shadows of the darkened corridor. I like taking the potentially sad and making it happy. I really love your work!

Posted 5 Years Ago


The Night Poet

5 Years Ago

Pray we will all love and appreciate in grandeur of that love in us. When gone, the last candle fla.. read more

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Added on September 14, 2018
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The Night Poet
The Night Poet

aliso viejo, CA



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Some people who write poetry today draw from their traumatic experiences, tragic emotional upbringing or racial and political injustice. Not so with Luis Vargas, The Night Poet. He did not have a te.. more..

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