Regrets

 

 

Last night he looked beautiful

Laying in the moonlight

Today he looks ugly

I let my lust get the best of me

The jello shots didn’t help either

I can’t wait to get rid of him

But he looks like he’s

made himself comfortable

Remote gripped in his hand

Feet propped up on my coffee table

I didn’t realize how big

his nose was

Damned bar lighting!

 

Last night she looked so sexy

Sprawled across the bed

But she’s not so hot in the daytime

Her b***s are kinda small

And she’s got some cottage cheese fat

On her a*s

That’s the last time I get wasted

And go home with some random chick

At least she has a big screen TV

I can still catch the game

 

Reviews

[Michael X]

this is intently humorous and I loved the idea, captures the morning after a one night stand in all its colorful glory. crafty, creative and original, the form accentuates the intent, the ending is punchline.
fun and lighthearted, excellent writing, the colorful graphic, I'm a fan of 60s artwork, this is awsome.

[verano]

Funny how these things work out. We're blinded by appearances one day, and the next we see it just the opposite way. Your poem captures the idea perfectly.

[Donna DeLong Matthews a..]

Very interesting take on both sides of a one nite stand
Nicely written and presented.
Hugs
Donna