"Roles Reversed"

"Roles Reversed"

A Poem by Lovesleftovers

she gave me life

changed my diapers

now I change hers

 

© 2008 Lovesleftovers


Author's Note

Lovesleftovers
I am just getting into writing haiku and am confused by all the "rules". I'd love some feedback and help from those more familiar than I with haiku. Thanks!

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Sorry I cant help you with haiku's but I can tell you
this was so heart touching for me for I
can so relate to this with my Dad who passed
away several years ago...
Wonderful write my new friend
and thank you so much for the friend request
Hugs
Donna

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Lovesleftovers
Lovesleftovers

Dallas, TX



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Eclectic, free-spirited and down-to-earth mother of three beautiful children. I plan on never growing up and always seeing the world through a writer's eyes. I write what I feel and throw out all the.. more..

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