A Feeling That I Thought Was Lost

A Feeling That I Thought Was Lost

A Poem by SW..if..TY
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A beautiful gal, that I know I can't be with..

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Gentle words and a soft easy voice

Joy in her smile, I'm left without a choice

I've fallen so hard for you, but know I can't have you

So what's the point in even tryin to pursue

I get weak when your eyes gaze my way

You have me in complete disarray

But I do think about you every single day

All my feelings get stuck, hard to convey

So I'll back off since I won't ever get the time of day

 

© 2013 SW..if..TY


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This is beautiful... an expression of unrequited love, perhaps...?...
I love this piece...classic in it's simplicity.. my kind of poetry! Your soft and gentle words swoon me.. ~xo~:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SW..if..TY

11 Years Ago

Aww thank you!! :) I wasn't to happy with this piece, but im VERY glad you enjoyed it! :)
Robbie~xoxo~

11 Years Ago

You should be proud!...it's very sweet! write more please... :)

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Added on April 4, 2013
Last Updated on April 4, 2013
Tags: Love, Friends, Relationships, Poetry, HipHop, Music, Life

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SW..if..TY
SW..if..TY

Charlotte, NC



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I am brutally honest thinker, If something crosses my mind, chances are im going to say it, or write it down, whether its a rhyme, or a random thought on a random topic. I love poetry and song writing.. more..

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