When Your Fucked

A partial song/verses for a song!

When you know your fucked, outta luck another feather plucked

Good luck trying to fly, as if you were to touch the sky

Askin why oh why, all I do is try and try as it all goes awry

Nearby is the good guy, watchin you through his glass eye 

Tightening his black tie, makin you his fall guy, the bad guy

Hereby I imply, that we no longer have allies

Make that wise guy cry when his lies arise to actual size

So as you slow down and lose that forward momentum

Givin up that crown and fall through the hierarchy spectrum

Injected with venom, cuz that's their main weapon

So go pick up your junk from seven eleven

Then head to the store to pick up your designer denim

Focused on a piece of paper and material goods

Locusts lease you peace, this is how it's understood

Where the hell is our Robin Hood? As we spill more blood

We will all drown like being hit by a flash flood

 

 

Watch the sky turn black, as they grab and drag you

Through crap infested waters, so for starters

Don't acknowledge them as martyrs, but murderers

The worlds leadin exporter of democracy and standing order

With missiles, guns and drones, and we're the supporters

Saying close the borders, Im a hard worker, get the mortars,

So we may continue to be a mindless fat American porker

 

 

 

Author's Note

PLEASE REVIEW AND CRITIQUE!!! :)

Reviews

[headoverheart]

I am definitely not a rapper, but i have a great deal of respect for those who can play with words and give them meaning. I was so close to singing this, the beat is inside my head. :) Great job

[Pretty_as_a_Poet]

I can REALY FEEL the beat to this... Great job as always

[Shannen Forrester]

writers block gone hun? :)
great as always!

[SW..if..TY]

ya I think its gone! haha ;p but thank you thank you! Is it bad that I write my poems/works in like 15-30min?? lol

[Shannen Forrester]

nope most of mine are dont in about 5 mins, it's when the feeling strikes :)

[SW..if..TY]

absolutely!!! hahaha and then it's quick to just pour out!

[Shannen Forrester]

exactly, nice to see someone else does it I kind of felt like a cheat :)

[SW..if..TY]

LOL I feel that way when I write too!! As if I shouldn't be writing these as quick as I do :p

[Shannen Forrester]

it's okay we'll be cheats together XD... wait I didn't mean it like that!

[SW..if..TY]

ahahahahahahahaha don't worry I know what you meant! lmao!!!

[Shannen Forrester]

lol XD

[uhknowbot-e]

i can never find your beat lol but i like

[SW..if..TY]

Never??? But thanks dude! Lol