I See All Your False Fallacies

I feel it crawling in my skin

The fear is my biggest weakness

The reality eating from within

The paranoia whispering secrets

 

Looking over my shoulder

Lies like winter wind, colder and colder

Deep inside my brain I know the truth

But they treat me like I can't see the proof

 

I'm done with fake family members

Saying we need to stick together

Yet they doubt my abilities at every turn

So now I'll make sure our relationship crashes and burns

 

I don't need your lies, dishonesty and negativity,

Ill make you see your mental deficiency

And prove to you I have the resiliency

And make you look at yourself a whole lot differently

Make sure my success is written in your mind vividly

Show you the consistency in your deficiency

Then sit back and watch as you have an epiphany

As you realize you aren't the epitome

Of a noble, honest and humble person

And I won't look back as I close this curtain

 

So goodbye to my fake a*s family

I won't become another one of your countless casualties

Because you so easily believe all your countless false fallacies

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

I have a very fake family that believes solely on what everyone else seems to believe, just because a government or another person tries to assert something as fact they will probably believe it and ignore any other possibilities or ideas..

Reviews

[Pretty_as_a_Poet]

I actually know what you mean, those who say your coming on too strong have no clue what it's like living with a family that is more about the show.

Everyone in my family LOVES to talk about my cousin, who's an "Actor", he is been an extra in one movie and now works as a plumber. Or the fact that there "SO proud of me now that i've gotten published" but in reality, most of my family doesn't care, in a matter of fact, it took me several tries to get my family's attention when I tried to announce me being published in the first place! I have a dad who is VERY opinionated about everything, and he lets everyone know what HE thinks, but when I try to tell him what I think, he doesn't listen, or even consider that theres more than one way to look at things. I love my family but I can't stand them half the time. I wish that they'd be a lot more real to people

[SW..if..TY]

Seriously!! Yo my mom, is the worst for not listening to others especially her children, she thinks she knows each one of us perfectly, and god forbid if she's ever wrong! she doesn't listen to herself for s**t..... so im closing the door, my lttle sister is no better than my mom, thinks she's above others

[char]

Fake families....a little strong there...but this is good, nonetheless. :D

[SW..if..TY]

They do exist!! and unfortunately my mom and little sister are the fakest members...

[Trigorin]

Not bad, but some of your language is a little simple and overdone. I'd consider going over this and making sure there's not a more elegant way of putting things.

[SW..if..TY]

Thank you! I will review it and see what I can change, I kinda felt the same way when I was writing, because I felt like I was having to try a little to hard to make some of the words work and make sense to the reader